Our first run went pretty well. We learned a few things, like being the last one to comment is tough. I personally had to go through all the previous comments and sort of hook my wagon to those, just to feel like I contributed. We also learned that a critique every 2 weeks might be a little long. For the time being we will go to every 10 days. So that will be today September 10th, then October 9th, October 18th, etc, etc.
If you know of anyone else who might be interested or suitable to join our group, we are looking to add 4 or 5 new members.
And now I bring you the next critique.